Category Archives: Advice

What not to do while finishing the first draft

  1. Decide that now would be a good time to dust the baseboards.
  2. Experiment with various sleep aids.
  3. Search real estate listings for forested lots only accessible by water.
  4. Download a Motley Crue song, to reconnect you with your youth.
  5. Take up scrapbooking, macrame, interpretive dance, or any combination of the three.
  6. Read Jane Austen, so that all your characters start saying things like, “he has not, perhaps, a more sorrowing heart than I have.”
  7. Wonder what your next novel will be, and why you have no ideas, and what it will be like to no longer write.
  8. Work on your acceptance speeches for various awards.
  9. Keep chocolate in the house so that when you finish the novel, you will weigh 600 pounds.
  10. Feel resentment towards your family when they make unreasonable demands on your time (such as “can I have a peanut butter sandwich?”).

Consumer warning

Do not start reading Free as a Bird at 10:30 at night, because you won’t be able to put it down. And if, by some miracle, you manage to tear yourself away at midnight, don’t start reading again at breakfast or you will get no work done all morning. It’s that good.

The book was shortlisted for a GG this year. But Gina McMurchy-Barber has already won a Governor General’s Award, for excellence in teaching Canadian history. Now that’s an impressive bio. (And I know her, which makes me cool by association.)

Mayday, Mayday!

I received an e-mail from Sarah this week, and she agreed that we should post it, in hopes of finding help from the wider world. I can’t personally offer a solution — my daughter STILL reads any new Rainbow Magic title that comes her way. And lately… she says she wants to take over when Daisy Meadows retires. This despite my explainations about Daisy Meadows NOT BEING REAL!

Whew… where were we? Ah, yes, help for Sarah. She writes:

Saints preserve me, Fiona has discovered Daisy Meadows’ Fairy Series that you used to rant about your prodigy reading a year ago. And since my daughter is not a prodigy, I have to read them to her. I had been deflecting her interest as stealthily but strongly as possible at the library, but when we came across one about a Fairy named Fiona, I could not be so cruel as to resist. And now she’s hooked. And they’re so bland they’re vile. Any survival tips?
– Sarah

So, what do to? Do we huck all the Rainbow Magic and refuse to read anything that doesn’t come with an author photo? Go Oregon-evangelical and host a book burning? Or do we give ourselves over to the fairies and goblins, all the while repeating to ourselves that any reading is good reading?

All advice welcome.

Writing lessons from The Arrival

The best part of unpacking is rediscovering forgotten treasures. I stumbled upon The Arrival a few days ago, a graphic novel by Shaun Tan which was first recommended to me by illustrator Kirsti Wakelin.

The Arrival is the story of an immigrant who flees oppression and arrives in a new land, where he must struggle to learn an unfamiliar language and culture, find a job, and hopefully bring his wife and child to join him. It’s told entirely without words, so it may seem a strange basis for writing lessons. But here’s what I think the book can teach wordsmiths:

1. Patience. The endpapers alone feature 60 individual drawings. Within the book are shockingly intricate city scapes, countless detailed facial expressions, moving hands, and intricate machinery. The project took four years to complete. There is a difference between banging out another story or whipping off another comic, and the painstaking realization of a dream. You have to admire (and hopefully emulate!) someone who’s chosen the latter.

2. Visceral Experience. The first time I “read” The Arrival, I was a little disappointed when, after the first few pages, it shifted from realism to fantasy. Within a few pages, I realized that Shaun Tan had to use an imaginary place, in order to make the reader viscerally feel the immigrant experience of arriving in a world so strange, it can barely be navigated. This is the ultimate in show, don’t tell. And as writers, we need to strive to make the reader undergo the emotion of our stories, not simply read the words.

3. Backstory. There are sections of The Arrival which tell the stories of minor characters’ lives. These are people with their own migration tales. In a few pages, Tan shows us the ways these minor characters have been changed by their adventures, and the ways in which their pasts affect how they interact with the protagonist. Too often in my writing, I use my minor characters as props, plopping them in as needed by the protagonist. But these people should have their own stories and their own histories.

4. Detail. The smallest illustrations in this book are the most poignant. In one frame, the protagonist uses his shoe to bang a nail into the wall. In the next frame, he hangs his family photo. There are infinite examples of this. The daisies raining down on the departing soldiers. The origami which appears from under a hat, and illuminates an entire father-daughter relationship. The comic face-spraying by an unfamiliar faucet.

I am in awe, again.

While you’re in the Shaun Tan mood, check out this site for his new short, based on The Lost Thing. Thanks to Simply Read for the link!

‘Cause that’s how they do it in Katroo

Following up on yesterday’s post, and the idea that everyone sucketh sometimes, there’s a fascinating post over at Booktryst about an unpublished Dr. Suess manuscript.

It seems that Dr. Suess has self-rejected here, casting this manuscript aside. His assistant asks him to reconsider, and the writer explains the problem with the work. He’s not at all defensive. He’s not emotional. He’s simply embraced the idea that not every bit of scribbled brainstorming is going to turn into a published work.

(On a side note, I happen to love Dr. Suess. More than my kids do. Which really isn’t fair. One of the benefits of having children should be unlimited Dr. Suess read alouds. And if my very favourite title is Happy Birthday to You! I should be able to read it before bedtime even if it does happen to be excessively long. So snip that with snoppers, kids.)

On embracing your inner suckiness

Here’s a small part of the talk I gave at Cap University a couple weeks ago. The talk itself was about inspiration, but this little portion is about how sometimes, your work will — to put it technically — sucketh. And that’s okay.

You hear a lot of people say that as a writer, you need to develop a thick skin. You need to be so sure of yourself that you maintain a perfect wall of self-defence even in the face of the most hurtful rejection.

Then you hear that writers must be supremely sensitive and empathetic. You need to notice the exact way the leaves look outside. You need to be able to recreate that stomach ache you got after your first boyfriend dumped you. You need to be able to eavesdrop on a bus stop conversation and feel empathy for those people, who might become your future characters.

If you develop a thick skin, and walk around telling yourself what a great writer you are, you lose some of that sensitivity.

So here’s my alternate advice:

Embrace your inner suckiness.

Sometimes, you’re going to suck. Admit it, embrace it, move on.

I’ve sent my publisher some proposals that make me want to crawl under my desk and hide when I think about how bad they are.

Consider:

Have I submitted a proposal for a book about ten ways the world might end… for the children’s market? Yes. Have I submitted a manuscript that was 20,000 words too short? Yes. Have I tried something new, like an early reader, and blatantly sucked at it? Yes.

And except for the proposal about the apocalypse, those situations worked out fine in the end. I sucked, I got over it. I fixed it. The books were published. You’re not going to be good at everything, and every idea is not going to work out. I’m sure Margaret Atwood doesn’t publish every piece of writing she does. Everyone sucks sometimes.

So, embrace that. Don’t worry if it’s going to suck, especially on the first draft.

How to Write a Book Proposal: 8

Hmmm… yet another example of the non-linear workings of my brain. I noticed that I haven’t exactly posted my book proposal parts in the order I promised, and… it’s possible I may have skipped the section on outlines.

It’s unfortunately true. When you write a non-fiction book proposal, you have to include an outline.

It takes a lot of work to create an outline.

You have to actually know what’s going to be in your book.

This is occasionally (um… always) a problem for me.

But wait… this post is supposed to be helpful, right? This is not my personal whining venue?

Okay, so, an outline provides a chapter-by-chapter summary of what’s in your proposed project. Writing one involves quite a bit of research, both to flesh out your initial lame and undeveloped ideas, and to find enough pithy gems to sprinkle around as sparkling promises of the wisdom to come.

You can write perfectly adequate outlines in point form, but I usually include a paragraph or two of text under each chapter heading. This gives the publisher yet another glimpse of your writing style. (You can even write your paragraphs in a tone similar to that of the final book.) It allows you to highlight your most interesting tidbits (the aforementioned gems), and allows you (theoretically, of course) to gloss over portions you haven’t quite wrestled into submission.

My outlines usually begin as brainstorming sessions. Next, I wander around in a distracted daze, asking friends, family members, and strangers things such as, “When you think of rebel activists, what comes to mind? How many activists can you name? Who’s your favorite?” and other annoying questions. Finally, I do a serious round of research, finding new connections and ideas. Quite possibly, if the proposal is rejected, this will have been a colossal waste of time. On the other hand, it may save hours at the first draft stage.

Yes. It’s possible that those of us who are complete dorks, and enjoy spending hours in the library, and are willing to research topics partly just so we can say we know a bunch of stuff, may have a teensy advantage in the world of non-fiction.




To read more about this subject:
Proposal Writing 7: Competition
Proposal Writing 6: Schedule
Proposal Writing 5: Readership
Proposal Writing 4: Format
Proposal Writing 3: The Summary
Proposal Writing 2: The Outline
Proposal Writing 1: The Reasons Why

Proposal Writing: 6

The next step in my proposal writing outline is “Schedule.” But do we really need to discuss this?

Tell them how much of the book is written and how long it’s going to take you to write the rest. All done.

Oh, except… make sure you add at least a month to your own estimate, before you put it down on paper, so that (a) when your great aunt calls and offers you an all-expenses paid trip to France, you can say yes (b) you don’t have to panic while writing the last chapter, becoming steadily grumpier until your family is forced to move in with the neighbors and (c) you’re not the loser calling up your publisher to ask for an extension.

Voila. Schedule. Brace yourself for my big example:

Schedule
I will need three months to complete the manuscript.





To read more about this subject:
Proposal Writing 5: Readership
Proposal Writing 4: Format
Proposal Writing 3: The Summary
Proposal Writing 2: The Outline
Proposal Writing 1: The Reasons Why